Wednesday, May 23, 2012

Black Ice

Black Ice


I didnt really like the poem but i understood what the point of the poem was. I believe it was about how society crupts your mind. The poem itself gave the message but its not something I would have done. Jeffery did a good job though at explaning whats happening.

Monday, May 21, 2012

Sarah Fay ; Julissa

sarah fay
if i should have a daughter

  I really like sarah kay because shes a good spoken word artist . I feel like her and julissa write the same and think the same. I liked the poem , it was a good choice . I kinda wish i would of picked her because i liked that poem so I can just imagine how good her other poems are.Overall I think she did a good job and glad she picked her.